How To Create An Impressive LinkedIn Summary — an S-B-S Guide With Examples

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Do not answer to that. Answer this:

Would you want to go out on a date with someone whom you do not like the profile of?

Social selling is about creating relationships as it is it is in the real world. It is important not to come across as unprofessional, sexy, or insincere.

Unfortunately, this is the way people behave even though they have a solid understanding of their field.


In this post we will discuss the primary reasons behind this unfortunate circumstance. We will provide you with information on the elements that make a great LinkedIn Summary and the best way to write one.

Let's begin with the essential, yet crucial things.

LinkedIn Profile Summary -- A Place Where Everyone Gets To Know You

What is the reason you should care regarding your LinkedIn summary?

It's the only spot that your potential customers have a clear picture of who you really are.

The first impression of a person is formed here. The answer is always "yes" or "no" in just one glance.

Your LinkedIn Summary conveys your personal style. It can either spark a connection with your potential customers or it doesn't. You only need words and Figma/Illustrator in order to create the feeling.

All of it is connected the photo you upload, the background image and of course, the words you speak about yourself as well as the method that you talk to future customers.

In essence the way you think about it, the way you present your LinkedIn summary is essentially an e-commerce landing page -that is that is a CTA section, to be precise. It's a vital element of your marketing strategy.

What is the role that LinkedIn Summary plays in establishing relationships?

Imagine someone sending you a message that you like because it's important to you, and you appreciate the tone. The person's message appeals to you, therefore you're not afraid to reply...

What's the next thing you do?

Visit their profiles!

Most of the time it only takes only a few minutes to determine what your relationship will look like.

If you are satisfied with what you are seeing, you return to a message and begin chat with the person.

Keep in mind that people are extremely insecure about strangers. To win their hearts you must do more than provide a concise summary:

  • Laser-focused on their needs
  • Compelling
  • Professional
  • Inspiring

It's not something you can be accomplished in just a few hours.

Be strategic

Here, I'd like to highlight this aspect because a large portion of the problems with LinkedIn prospecting are due to ignorance of fundamental marketing concepts.

A great LinkedIn description is an essential element of your image as a brand. Even if your brand's image is only you, there's an advantage to taking every step of differentiation process. There is a lot to complete.

I recommend you begin by reading "Positioning. A war for your brain" written by Jack Trout. This is a must-read when you're serious about your marketing. It explains how to be noticed in an extremely crowded industry (and it's not simply by doing the things you're good at.)

After you have figured out what is an appropriate image for your company, you are able to begin to implement your positioning strategy by filling in information about your company through your online social media accounts.

Imaginary Scenario

Let's say Nazar from Closely has sent you an email.

Like someone real. It's a great first step.

Wow! What a great idea! The colors are perfect! Nazar captured a photo of himself wearing the colors of the brand. 10 points.

It's all in the form in the form of education, job the name of a business, and a brand-name background image.

Scrolling down...

A-ha, here's the answer you've been looking to see. It's time to listen to Nazar's voice. Check out what the man says.

The summary is succinct simple, concise and not overpowering. You'll get all the information you require in just five paragraphs. The summary is a list of bullet points that will address your needs prior to the time (so you'll have the impression that the man is ready to roll up his sleeves and start working).

After having read the summary, you'll know that:

  1. Someone real left you this message. The decision of whether to respond isn't the issue for now however, in the end, you're probably not intimidated by the sensation that comes with "bot invasion."
  2. The summary is professionalIt doesn't beat over the top and can save the time of dealing to "fluff" (irrelevant information). The voice is pleasant and relaxed, however not in an overly childish fashion.
  3. It has distinct selling points, and it's not only about the guy -- you can find the things that are "in there for you" in the text.
  4. It's the only one emoji that completely corresponds to the background image (details matter!)

The opposite scenario is now in play.

  1. The first step is to take note of the instances she has used "I" in the text.

Okay, don't do it It's 17. 17 times in just 8 paragraphs! All about herNothing is there for potential customers.

  1. This flurry of emoticons... The reality is that of of course, it's highly subjective, but generally, there is a good usage of emojis within your text. The best approach to approaching this is to use the'salt test'. Utilize emojis in the same manner as sprinkle salt on your foodfor the sake of adding some flavor and not take the flavor from a dish.

Another example that isn't so great:

  1. Very long
  2. The third person narrative is perceived as fake, distant and as if someone else wrote it.

This brings us to a query.

What Makes A Nice LinkedIn Profile Summary?

One thing to keep in mind the following: your LinkedIn summary isn't an overview of your CV. It's not meant in attracting HR executives, nor is it about exaggerating about yourself, but to be open to your target audience and make clear "what is in there for them."

As we have already mentioned that you should consider you LinkedIn summary as the CTA part of the landing page.

The things you must be sure to include on your LinkedIn overview are as follows:

  • Your talents and accomplishments
  • Personal observations, observations, and insights
  • Unique selling point
  • The tone of voice of your brand
  • Humour (if it is in line to your voice, and if it's appropriate)
  • Contact details/CTA
  • Inconsistency at the finer aspects of tone, style, tenses , punctuation and style
  • Keywords for SEO

Things you shouldn't include in LinkedIn summary:

  • Turning it into a fiction
  • The presentation is in the third person
  • Too many emojis, particularly diverse/bitty ones
  • Only the details you are interested in
  • Data points and a confusing language
  • Too many CTAs

Let's take a look at some more examples.

LinkedIn Summary -- Bad Examples

Too Long:

Have you had a look? We haven't either.

Too little:

This is too short for our bizdev, who is a fan of shortening things.

Too self-centered:

Nobody cares about your awards, diplomas and how many push-ups you do each day.

People are self-centered. They wish for the world to revolve around their heads.

In actual fact the less you boast about yourself more you should be doing, the more humble. Particularly if it isn't clear how to express your accomplishments without causing offence to others.

Below are some suggestions for telling about your accomplishments to create admiration in others, but not appear like an obnoxious jerk.

Too fragmented

There's a thin distinction between structuring your content, and leaving it completely unstructured.

In this case there are too many CTAs and too many different Emojis, and no distinctive selling point and there is no general concept.

Too fluffy:

"We are all not afraid to take a risk" Are they talking about taking an airplane two minutes before it leaves? Or...pushing the speed to the speed of 145 mph when it's wet on a roadway... ? ?

You might be thinking of getting back in touch with your former partner?

Since that's where I learned to be able to test myself.

How do you feel? ... The list goes on and you could continue on like this, because the girl didn't explain what she was referring to.

Detail is crucial otherwise, your LinkedIn summary will become an extremely generalized description that sounds like the opposite of professional.

LinkedIn Summary -- Good Examples

#1 Simple and light-hearted

  • Clear thoughts flow
  • Transparent
  • It is perfect in length of (9 paragraphs)
  • Logically sequential

A summary of this kind provides sufficient details about the topic and provides a clear definition and flow, so that readers are able to easily follow their ideas. It's like a relaxing relaxed, stress-free experience that is clear and doesn't throw any unpleasant obstacles.

A little about her A little about her accomplishments and a final line that ends with a value proposition. The perfect amount.

How can I create an excellent overview for LinkedIn?

Of of course, there's no any strict guidelines to write an effective LinkedIn summary.

There are, however, the best practices we would recommend to adhere to.

  1. Keep it under 1500 words Ten paragraphs, and you can add spaces between paragraphs.
  1. Utilize SEO keywords

Incorporate relevant SEO keywords when appropriate, to create a summary that is LinkedIn search engine optimized.

SEO keywords are perfect for the realm of specialties.

Keep in mind that the more narrow your knowledge is, the higher the chance of appearing at the top results of LinkedIn results.

Too broad:

It's perfect:

Sentence Length

Short sentences are fine. However, if you have more than one, then they may create friction. Simply combine long sentences and shorter ones naturally.

Check this out. It's not too bad, doesn't it is it?

There are sentences that are long, but they are able to fit pretty well. If your thought is crystal clear, it will acquire its structure in whatever sentences you choose to use. The concept is the main.

Let's review your upcoming compelling summary point-by-point.


Begin with a few words about your self. Don't be proud of your accomplishments Maintain your appearance neat and professional. Two to three sentences are sufficient.


Focus on your unique selling point. The body of your report must directly address your audience , and outline the ways in which their issues are addressed.

Utilize bullet points to spell out your distinctive selling factors.

Wrap-Up + CTA

Make sure to finish your LinkedIn overview with an CTA such as dropping your email address for inquiries or dropping a hyperlink to your site.

An effective method to conclude your overview is to add specific areas of expertise. You can indicate the fields that you are skilled in by organizing them by using bullet points.

Emojis are only used when absolutely required. Two is plenty.


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